

One mental image that surfaced when imagining this place came from the 2005 Steven Baxter novel Transcendant. In one chapter the protagonist visits a subterranian hive of near-humans that live and communicate llike members of an ant colony, complete with a queen, drone castes and a lack of individual independant thought among members. Those other than the queen that interacted with outside influences were rather harshly euthenised by the collective as their minds would struggle to bear the magnitude of the world outside their colony.

One of the other
investigations I tried was colour contrast. With Anastasia there was
emphasis on coloured stones such as agate, onyx, chalcedony and
chrysoprase and a possible culture revolving around cutting and
polishing these stones. So what I tried to imagine is that while the
city is colourful and beautiful, perhaps walls studded, it hides an
ethic where the only pleasure comes from work. So there is perhaps a
colourful and drab side of the city that exists side by side with each
other - perhaps colourful stones at street level and more drab colours
at higher levels where the eyes of the city's residents are less likely
to look. Or perhaps the other way around, coloured stones inlaid in
upper-floor walls where visitors are more likely to look on their
travels though the city while residents keep their gaze to the more drab
ground and first floors of buildings.
One trhing I have gotten the impression of regarding these cities - the people. In several of them the people sound like listless entities; daily routines, uncomfortable living conditions, being content with a bleak metropolis. It was as if Maro Polo wanted his listener to be both mystified and wary of these cities inhabited by strange shades of human beings. I might be looking too much into this though
One trhing I have gotten the impression of regarding these cities - the people. In several of them the people sound like listless entities; daily routines, uncomfortable living conditions, being content with a bleak metropolis. It was as if Maro Polo wanted his listener to be both mystified and wary of these cities inhabited by strange shades of human beings. I might be looking too much into this though
Hey Mark, I'm enjoying your writing - love the way you're thinking 'into' these cities, and expressing your ideas so engagingly :)
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff Mark - 95 and 103 stand strongest to me from this bunch.
ReplyDeleteHow about compiling some influence maps to further bolster your ideas? Keep them loose too... textures, colours, interesting structural forms etc..
I'll look into that. It might help me generate ideas.
DeleteHey Mark,
ReplyDeleteOkay I figured I would pick one from each set as not to be in favour of a particular idea but in favour of the best from you individual ideas. At the end of the day it comes down to what you feel is right here but let me explore these a little...
Okay from the Diomira set I liked 74 the statue looks something to be feared or in awe of (especially due to the upward angle). You should consider taking these sketches into Photoshop so you can do more harsh silhouettes, pencil is all well and good but Photoshop will allow you to forge chunks of white in your black shapes.
Of your Argia number 88 it almost looks like a disjointed tree which has things growing under it which is the exact opposite of how plants grow (not in shade but in light). Still it stood out to me.
I concur with Jackie on Despina having read your extract it being a "Nice" place to live 103 pretty much says it you need the city to feel "epic" and in 103 it does kind of look like its shining almost... the angle is also pretty nice.
For Anastasia your last one 128 I love the angle I also love the way the buildings almost drape behind each other. I also read your theory on the colour I kind of thought that the city at night would have no colour (so it is in-fact the sun which brings colour to the objects/structures in town. Without light there is no colour.... You could then make god rays of colour etc which would look amazing.... Its just an idea but its something different.
Hope this helps Mark,
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Yeah for Diomora It might be interesting to have high-contrast statues and low-contrast buildings, bringing your eye to these towering golden beings that loom high over the city. I'll ocnsider that "photoshop shadows contrast" idea.
DeleteWhen I originally drew 88 I thought about a gigantic tree root. Although an underground tree, while not veryrealistic, does sound quite fantastical in nature.
For ANastasia a nighttime scene where there was no colour is an interesting thought, perhaps it could be a way to encourage the people of the city to not find other forms of pleasure after work hours as their hometown is very dull and featureless at night, encouraging people to stay i ntheir homes due to a lack of interest.