Character Project: More Outlines

  I created these outlines on Friday. Back when I made them I planned to do more after returning home from working late at the university however when I sat down to work I think I had gotten myself to work late enough. The difference between 1 and 2 are why despite the appeal of a flowing red cape, everyone lacks them. The addition of a cloak just obliterates  the detail of a character's form. It can also make poses much harder to discern.

  I myself am drawn to 4, 10, 9 and 12. Though I do also like what I made 12 do with his hands. I think it gives him a mystic quirkiness. 10 might be the weakest design of these selected though. He seems a little too "generic soldier hero" like.

Step Outline and Revised script

A revision of my proposed script as well as a step outline. The step outline felt surprisingly short compared to my actual script.

 

The guidelines on the Ucreative site suggest for each page to be representative of one minute of footage. While I have stepped slightly over this guideline I wonder if I have enough fluidity that I can fit it into one minute. If not I could always keep my intro brief, or perhaps splice it into an establishing panning shot of the plane's interior.

High Aspirations Step Outline

High Aspirations Script Version 2